After my final critique, I am choosing to make some changes to make my design more coherent. First, I want to try to add some interactivity to the cover, though I was rather reluctant to do so. For the opening & contents spread I want to make the description more of a slide show than choice and add perhaps a note from the editor to provide more context to the words toggling through. On the same spread, I plan on making the article titles more easily read and the interactivity more clear. The news spread could use a face lift or something, or just more clarity...just not a fan of the spread. I'm pretty satisfied with the impact spread for Coachella though plan on making it more apparent that it continues onto the next page. And finally, the article spread needs a text deduction and more interactivity.
